Perilous 2.0!


It's been eight months since I wrote Perilous, and needless to say, my writing has improved significantly since then. I figured the time had come to give Perilous an update... an update that is now complete!

Here's what's new:

  • Updated prose for crisper feel
  • Lengthened fight sequence - Ben is a much scarier foe now
  • Reworked victory sequence subtly - should be more satisfying?

Let me know what you think, and if you want to see more short stories from this universe. Cheers!

Files

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Apr 03, 2021

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